Enhancing Syntax for Clarity

Hard Language And Composition Syntax

In the sentence below, examine the structure and organization of the clauses:

"Although the storm was fierce, the team continued their game; they were determined to finish despite the rain and mud.”

Which of the following sentences best revises the syntax to enhance clarity and flow while maintaining the original meaning?

The fierce storm, the team continued their game; they were determined to finish despite rain and mud.

Despite the fierce storm, determined to finish, the team continued their game even with rain and mud.

The storm was fierce, yet the team, determined to finish, continued their game despite rain and mud.

While the team was determined to finish, they continued their game despite the fierce storm and the mud.

The team, despite the fierce storm, continued their game determined to finish even with the rain and mud.

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