Analyzing Syntax for Clarity

Very Hard Language And Composition Syntax

In the following sentence, analyze the use of syntax to determine which option demonstrates the most effective restructuring to enhance clarity and impact:

Despite her timid disposition, the artist, with unwavering determination, undertook an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable, leading her to question her abilities and resolve.

Which of the following revisions maintains the original meaning while improving the overall syntax?

With unwavering determination, the artist undertook, despite her timid disposition, an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable, which led her to question her abilities and resolve.

Despite her timidity, the artist undertook an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable, leading her to question her abilities and resolve with unwavering determination.

Questioning her abilities and resolve, the artist, despite being timid, undertook an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable with unwavering determination.

The artist, despite being timid, undertook an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable, and this unwavering determination caused her to question her abilities and resolve.

Despite her timid disposition, the artist undertook an ambitious project that seemed insurmountable, questioning her abilities and resolve due to her unwavering determination.

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