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Read the following sentence:

The festival not only celebrates cultural diversity, but it also promotes the importance of local arts and crafts, which enrich the community.

Which of the following revisions most effectively emphasizes the role of local arts and crafts during the festival?

The festival celebrates cultural diversity and highlights how local arts and crafts enrich the community.

The festival, which showcases cultural diversity, is a good event for local artists to get noticed.

The festival enhances local art and crafts with a celebration of cultural diversity.

During the festival, visitors enjoy cultural diversity and the very local arts and crafts that enrich the community.

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