Choosing an Engaging Revision

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"Despite her lack of experience in the field, she approached the project with a positive demeanor, excited to learn new things and contribute."

Which of the following revisions maintains the original meaning while employing a more engaging style?

Though she had little experience, she was eager to work on the project.

She was new to the field but was happy to take on the project.

Having no prior experience, she took on the project with enthusiasm.

Even though she was inexperienced, she tackled the project with excitement.

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