Diction and Mood in an Excerpt

Hard Prose Analysis Diction And Syntax

Read the following excerpt from a contemporary novel:

In the dim light of the antique shop, the dusty relics whispered stories of forgotten times, each object steeped in a history richer than the varnish that coated them.

How does the author’s choice of diction in the excerpt contribute to the overall mood and atmosphere of the scene?

The author's use of scientific terminology creates a clinical atmosphere.

The choice of 'whispered' and 'forgotten times' evokes a sense of mystery and nostalgia.

The use of casual language makes the scene feel modern and relatable.

Describing the objects as 'dusty relics' implies a sense of urgency and decay.

The term 'antique shop' contributes to a disinterested ambiance, lacking emotional depth.

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