Effective Revision for Clarity and Engagement

Medium Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Read the following excerpt from a fictional story:

Maria had always dreamed of becoming a doctor. Despite the challenges she faced, such as balancing her studies with part-time work, her determination never waned. She worked late into the night, pouring over textbooks and research papers.

Which of the following sentences provides the most effective revision of the underlined portion of the passage?

Working tirelessly each evening, she immersed herself in her textbooks and research papers.

Late into the night, she spent hours reading her textbooks and research.

She stayed up at night, looking through her textbooks and research papers.

She devoted many nights to studying her research papers and textbooks.

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