Enhancing Autumn Imagery

Hard Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following passage:

As autumn descends upon the landscape, a transformation occurs. The once vibrant greens fade into a plethora of warm hues: deep reds, golden yellows, and burnt oranges. People venture outdoors, their breath visible in the chillier air, marveling at how nature changes its attire from summer’s bright blossoms to autumn’s rich tapestry.

To enhance the vividness of this scene, the author considers revising a specific part. Which revision best improves the style of the passage?

As autumn settles in, the once shiny greens turn into a mix of warm colors.

As autumn descends, landscapes transform that exhibits a rich tapestry of seasonal colors.

With the arrival of autumn, nature cloaks itself in a vibrant display of deep reds, golden yellows, and burnt oranges.

During fall, the landscape changes from green to different colors.

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