Enhancing Clarity and Conciseness

Hard Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Read the following sentence and choose the option that best enhances its clarity and conciseness:

In order to assess the effectiveness of the training program that was implemented last year for new employees, it is necessary to evaluate the outcomes in comparison to industry standards, as well as to consider the feedback collected from participants.

To effectively assess last year's training program for new employees, we must evaluate the outcomes against industry standards and participant feedback.

To determine whether the training program implemented last year is effective, we need to evaluate the outcomes in comparison with industry standards, alongside participant feedback.

Assessing the effectiveness of last year’s training program for new employees necessitates evaluating the outcomes, comparing them with industry standards and participant feedback.

Evaluating the effectiveness of the training program implemented last year for new employees necessitates an assessment of outcomes relative to industry standards and the feedback of participants.

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