Enhancing Clarity in Urgent Communication

Hard Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Read the following sentence:

Despite the challenges presented by climate change, the ongoing innovations in renewable energy technologies promise a brighter future, making it imperative for governments and industries to act decisively.

Which of the following revisions to the underlined phrase enhances the clarity and impact of the sentence?

which could make governments and industries feel pressured to respond.

thereby creating an urgent need for immediate governmental and industrial responses.

as it encourages governments and industries to consider options.

leading to an eventual expectation of action from these entities.

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