Enhancing Descriptive Style

Very Hard Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following passage:

'In the quiet of early morning, the world is a canvas of possibilities, each moment a brushstroke waiting to be applied. Birds stir, their melodies a soft prelude to the day, while the gentle breeze whispers secrets to the trees. The sun, a reluctant artist, begins to spill its golden paint across the horizon, inviting life to emerge from the shadows.'

Which option best enhances the descriptive and evocative style of the passage without altering its original meaning?

In the silent hours of dawn, the world transforms into a tapestry of potential, each fleeting second a stroke waiting to be painted.

At dawn, birds make sounds before the day starts, and the sun rises slowly over the sky, bringing light to the Earth.

In the early morning, the world is surprisingly quiet, as birds chirp softly along with the breeze, and the sunlight slowly appears.

In morning light, the world is full of opportunities, as each moment feels as if it could become something great.

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