Enhancing Descriptive Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"The stormy night was filled with an eerie silence, as if the world was holding its breath in anticipation of the chaos to come."

Which revision of the sentence best enhances its descriptive style?

The night was stormy and quiet.

On that tempestuous night, an unsettling stillness enveloped the landscape.

The night was wild and loud.

There was a storm with silence.

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