Enhancing Descriptive Style in a Passage

Hard Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following passage:

The city was alive with energy, bustling crowds moving through the streets like an endless river. Every block buzzed with excitement, the air thick with the sound of laughter and conversation. Entering a small café, I was enveloped by the rich aroma of freshly brewed coffee—

Which of the following options would best enhance the descriptive style of this passage?

the melancholy notes of an old piano in the corner.

soft jazz playing quietly in the background.

the faint sound of rain tapping against the window.

the vibrant chatter of patrons sharing their day.

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