Enhancing Sentence Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"Maria enjoyed her time at the beach, where she spent hours swimming and sunbathing."

Which revision enhances the style of this sentence?

Maria had a good time at the beach.

Maria spent some time at the beach, swimming and soaking up the sun.

Maria loved the beach, where she swam and tanned for many hours.

Maria went to the beach and swam and lay in the sun.

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