Enhancing Sentence Style

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Read the following sentence:

Tom's enthusiasm for painting was evident; he spent every Saturday at the local art studio, blending colors and creating vibrant landscapes.

Which of the following revisions best enhances the style of this sentence?

Tom was very enthusiastic about painting.

Tom's passion for painting shone through during his Saturdays at the art studio.

Tom liked painting and went to the art studio on weekends.

Tom often painted on Saturdays.

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