Enhancing Sentence Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

Maria was an expert baker; she could make cakes, cookies, and pastries that were delicious.

Which of the following revisions would best enhance the style of this sentence?

Maria was a baker who made delicious cakes, cookies, and pastries.

Maria was an expert baker; she created baked goods that were full of flavor.

Maria could create delicious cakes, cookies, and pastries.

Maria was an average baker; her cakes were just okay.

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