Enhancing Sentence Style

Medium Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

'The local bakery, known for its delectable pastries, has become a central part of the community, where people gather to enjoy the sweet treats and catch up with friends.'

Which revision best enhances the style of this sentence?

The local bakery sells pastries and has many customers in the community.

Renowned for its exquisite pastries, the local bakery has emerged as a beloved hub in the neighborhood, attracting patrons who savor the delights and reconnect with friends.

The bakery is popular and people like their pastries.

The community enjoys visiting the bakery, which has pastries.

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