Enhancing Sentence Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

As the sun set over the horizon, painting the sky with hues of orange and pink, the evening promised a sense of tranquility.

Which of the following revisions best enhances the style of the sentence?

The sun went down, making the sky look orange and pink, and the evening was calm.

While the sun sank below the horizon, the colors of orange and pink filled the sky, suggesting peace.

The horizon was obscured by buildings as the sunset was happening.

The sun set, and it got dark.

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