Enhancing Style in a Descriptive Sentence

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Read the following sentence:

The old library, with its dusty shelves and flickering lights, had an undeniable charm that attracted many visitors.

Which of the following revisions best enhances the style of this sentence?

The library was old, dusty, and charming, with many visitors.

Visitors flocked to the old library, enchanted by its dusty shelves and flickering lights.

In the library, many dusty shelves and flickering lights seemed charming.

The library's oldness meant that it had a charm, and many visitors came.

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