Enhancing Style in a Sentence

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

The children played outside, laughing and chasing each other, enjoying the warm sunshine and fresh air.

Which of the following revisions most effectively enhances the style of this sentence?

The children played outside happily, running after one another under the bright sun.

The children frolicked in the great outdoors, their laughter echoing as they dashed joyfully in the golden light.

The children were outside where they played and laughed together.

The children enjoyed the weather outside.

Submitted8.3K

Correct7.9K

% Correct95%