Enhancing Style Through Vivid Imagery

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Read the following sentence:

"In the heart of the forest, the silence was profound, occasionally punctuated by the soft rustle of leaves or the distant call of a bird."

Which revision would enhance the style and vividness of this sentence?

"Deep within the forest, the silence was like a thick blanket, broken only by a whispering wind or a bird's distant cry."

"In the forest, there was silence that was interrupted by leaves and a distant bird."

"The forest was silent except for the occasional noise of leaves or a bird calling far away."

"The forest was quiet, and sometimes leaves moved or a bird made sounds miles away."

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