Enhancing the Persuasiveness of a Climate Argument

In a recent discussion about climate change, a student presented the argument that urgent action is necessary to combat its impacts. They wrote, "The rapid deteriorating condition of our planet due to climate change should compel individuals, corporations, and governments to take immediate and robust measures. Indeed, if we delay these actions, the consequences could be catastrophic." Which of the following revisions would most effectively enhance the clarity and persuasiveness of this argument?