Improving Clarity and Impact in Sentences

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Read the following sentence:

The committee's decision, while well-intentioned, was not particularly effective in addressing the underlying issues within the community.

Which of the following revisions would most improve the clarity and impact of this sentence?

The committee's decision was aimed at solving the problems in the community, but it was not effective.

Well-intentioned as it was, the committee's decision failed to effectively address the community's problems.

The committee made a decision that was well-intentioned, but it did not truly address the problems of the community.

The committee's decision, while intended to help, did not fix the serious problems that the community faced.

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