Improving Clarity and Conciseness

Easy Rhetorical Skills Strategy

Read the following sentence from a student's essay:

"The novel explored the complex emotional landscape of its characters, presenting their struggles in a way that was both relatable and poignant."

What is the best way to revise the underlined phrase in this sentence to enhance clarity and conciseness?

presenting their struggles in a relatable yet poignant way.

depicting their conflicts in an emotionally resonant manner.

depicting their struggles in a way that was relatable and touching.

illustrating their emotional conflicts in a universal and heartfelt way.

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