Improving Clarity and Effectiveness of Sentences

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Read the following sentence:

The artist, inspired by nature, created a beautiful painting that displayed the colors of the sunset.

Which revision improves the clarity and effectiveness of the sentence?

The artist made a beautiful painting showing sunset colors inspired by nature.

Inspired by the beauty of nature, the artist created a painting that vividly displayed sunset colors.

The artist created a painting inspired by nature that pretty much had sunset colors.

A painting was created by the artist that showed beautiful colors of the sunset because of nature.

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