Improving Clarity in a Sentence

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Read the following sentence closely:

Marcus enjoys playing basketball, he has practiced several hours each week.

Which of the following revisions best improves the clarity and effectiveness of this sentence?

Marcus enjoys playing basketball, and he has practiced for several hours each week.

Marcus, who enjoys basketball practice, several hours each week.

Marcus enjoys playing basketball too practicing several hours each week.

Marcus enjoys playing basketball; he practices hours each week.

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