Improving Clarity in a Sentence

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Read the following sentence and choose the option that best improves its clarity and effectiveness:

The children were afraid of the loud noise from the thunderstorm outside.

The children were scared of the loud noise that the thunderstorm outside made.

The children fearfully heard the loud noise from the thunderstorm outside.

The children were terrified of the loud thunderstorm noise outdoors.

Outside, the thunderstorm made loud noises that frightened the children.

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