Improving Clarity in an Educational Essay

Medium Rhetorical Skills Strategy

Read the following sentence from an essay discussing the impact of technology on education:

"While technology has undoubtedly revolutionized the educational experience through innovative tools and platforms, it has also created challenges that educators must address, such as ensuring equitable access to these resources for all students.”

Which of the following revisions best improves the clarity and focus of this sentence?

Although technology has changed education positively by introducing new tools, it has also caused some difficulties for teachers.

Technology is important to education, but it also presents challenges.

While technology revolutionizes education with tools and platforms, educators face issues with access.

Education has improved due to technology, but teachers face problems related to access to resources.

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