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Digital SAT
Digital SAT Reading and Writing Section

Improving Clarity in Market Description

Easy Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

In the following excerpt, the author describes a scene in a bustling market:

As vendors shouted out their prices and customers haggled over fresh produce, the scent of spices filled the air, creating an atmosphere of vibrant activity.

Which of the following revisions would improve the clarity and effectiveness of this passage?

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