Improving Clarity in Sentence Structure

Very Easy Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Consider the following sentence:

The book was good, it had many interesting ideas and characters.

Which revision best improves the clarity of this sentence?

The book was good; it had many interesting ideas and characters.

Good was the book, it had many ideas and characters that interested.

The book was good it had several interesting ideas along with characters.

The book that was good had ideas and characters that were interesting.

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