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PSAT/NMSQT
PSAT Writing and Language Test

Improving Paragraph Organization on Biodiversity

Medium Expression Of Ideas Organization

The following paragraph addresses the importance of biodiversity in maintaining ecological balance. However, the organization of the sentences can be improved to enhance clarity. Read the paragraph carefully:

Endangered species often serve as indicators of environmental health. The loss of biodiversity can lead to unforeseen consequences such as ecosystem collapse. Preserving diverse species prevents the cascading effects of loss. Such conservation efforts are not only vital for these species but also for the ecosystems they inhabit. Furthermore, a rich variety of flora and fauna contributes to better resilience against environmental changes.

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