Improving Passage Organization

Medium Expression Of Ideas Organization

Read the following passage and consider how it could be improved for clarity and organization.

Many teens experience stress during final exams. They often struggle to balance studying, extracurricular activities, and social lives. This stress can lead to unhealthy coping mechanisms, such as procrastination or excessive reliance on caffeine.

To manage this stress, teens should prioritize their time effectively. Setting specific study schedules can help them stay organized. It's important to find a balance between studying and self-care, which is often overlooked.

Based on this passage, which of the following revisions most effectively improves its organization?

Rearrange sentences to place the discussion of stress directly after the introduction.

Add a concluding sentence that reinforces the importance of time management.

Include a list of specific stress-relief strategies at the end of the passage.

Combine the second and third paragraphs to strengthen the relationship between stress and coping measures.

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