Improving Sentence Clarity

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Strategy

Read the following sentence and consider how to make it more effective:

"The concert was really fun and had a lot of popular songs that everyone liked."

Which revision best improves the clarity and impact of this sentence?

The concert featured popular songs, making it enjoyable for attendees.

Everyone thought the concert was fun and had lots of songs.

The concert was really exciting with many enjoyable songs.

The concert was enjoyable and fun because of the songs.

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