Improving Sentence Clarity

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Read the following sentence closely:

Jenna was very tired after the long hike, she was also excited to have finally reached the summit.

Which of the following revisions best improves the clarity and effectiveness of the sentence?

Jenna was very tired after the long hike; however, she was also excited to have finally reached the summit.

Jenna was tired after the hike, she excited to reach the summit.

Jenna, tired after the hike, she was also excited about reaching the top.

After a long hike, Jenna was so tired, she was also excited to reach the summit.

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