Improving Sentence Clarity

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Read the following sentence:

"The little girl quickly ran to the playground her excitement evident on her face."

In this sentence, which change best improves the clarity and effectiveness of the description?

Add a comma after 'playground'.

Change 'quickly ran' to 'ran quickly'.

Remove 'the' before 'little girl'.

Change 'evident' to 'clear'.

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