Improving Sentence Clarity and Conciseness

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Strategy

Read the following sentence and consider its effectiveness:

"The new community center will provide opportunities for residents to engage, become active, and to learn new skills."

What is the best way to improve this sentence in terms of clarity and conciseness?

The new community center will provide opportunities for residents to engage, become active, and learn skills.

Residents will engage, become active, and learn skills at the new community center, which is providing opportunities.

The opportunities at the new community center for residents to engage, become active, and to learn new skills.

The community center will provide a place for residents to engage, and also to be active and learn new skills.

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