Improving Sentence Clarity and Effectiveness

Very Easy Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Read the following sentence and choose the option that best improves its clarity and effectiveness:

The sun was shining bright, and the day was very warm as the children played happily in the park.

The sun was shining brightly, and the day was warm as the children playedjoyfully in the park.

The shining sun and warm day made the children play happily in the park.

As the children happily played in the park, the sun was shining bright, and it was a warm day.

The sun shone bright, and the day was warm while children played in the park, happily.

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