Improving Sentence Clarity and Effectiveness

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Read the following sentence and choose the option that best improves its clarity and effectiveness:

In order to understand the needs of the community, a survey was devised and conducted by the city officials, ensuring that their opinions were gathered and acknowledged in the decision-making process.

To understand community needs, city officials devised and conducted a survey to gather and acknowledge opinions in decision-making.

To ensure that city officials acknowledged and gathered opinions, a survey was conducted and devised by them for the community's needs.

The needs of the community were understood through the devising and conducting of a survey by the city officials, gathering opinions for decision-making.

City officials gathered and acknowledged opinions through conducting and devising a survey in order to understand the community's needs.

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