Improving Sentence Clarity and Impact

Medium Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Consider the following sentence:

Despite the heavy rain, the community came together to host the annual festival, showcasing resilience and unity.

Which revision best improves the clarity and impact of this sentence?

Even with the heavy rain, the community managed to host the annual festival, showing that they are resilient and united.

The annual festival was hosted by the community despite the heavy rain, which showcased their resilience and sense of unity.

Heavy rain did not stop the community from hosting their annual festival, which demonstrated resilience and unity.

In spite of the rain, the festival was hosted by the community, showing resilience and also unity.

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