Improving Sentence Structure

Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

Jenna's passion for the environment drove her to volunteer at community clean-up events, where she not only helped organize efforts but also educated participants about sustainable practices.

Which of the following changes to the underlined portion would improve the overall style of the sentence?

remove "not only" and replace it with "and also"

replace "about" with "on"

remove "but also" and replace it with "in addition"

leave it as it is

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