Improving Sentence Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"The car zoomed down the street like a bolt of lightning, making everyone turn their heads in awe."

Which revision improves the style of this sentence while maintaining its original meaning?

"The car drove fast on the street and got attention from the people."

"The vehicle rushed down the road, causing onlookers to gaze in amazement."

"The automobile traveled quickly down the road while people looked around."

"The car went fast down the road, and people noticed it."

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