Improving Sentence Style

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"The cat sat by the window, watching birds fly by in the blue sky."

Which revision improves the style of this sentence?

The cat was by the window, observing birds as they flew in the sky.

Sitting by the window, the cat was keenly observing the birds soaring in the bright blue sky.

The cat, at the window, saw birds fly in the sky.

The cat, which was by the window, watched the birds fly by.

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