Improving Sentence Style Through Revision

Very Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"The storm made the tall trees sway and the rain fell heavily. It was very windy that day."

Which revision improves the style of this sentence?

"The storm caused the towering trees to bend and the rain poured down with intensity; the wind howled fiercely that day."

"That day, it rained heavily and the trees were tall and swayed."

"The storm came with strong winds and heavy rain."

"The wind was strong, and the storm made everything wet and cold."

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