Improving Style with Vivid Imagery

Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

'The sun rose over the horizon, casting a golden glow on the sleepy town.'

Which revision improves the style of this sentence by adding vivid imagery?

'The sun rose over the horizon, illuminating the town as dawn broke.'

'The sun rose, making the town a place of light.'

'The sun rose, gradually brightening the sleepy town.'

'The sun began to rise, spreading its warm light across the sleeping town.'

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