Improving the Clarity of a Sentence on College Acceptance

Hard Expression Of Ideas Effective Language Use

Evaluate the following sentence and choose the option that most effectively improves its clarity and impact:

All of the students were very happy because they received their acceptance letters to college, which they had been really looking forward to for a long time.

The students were ecstatic about their college acceptance letters, eagerly anticipated for quite a while.

The students were incredibly joyful upon receiving their acceptance letters from college, which they awaited for a long time.

Every student felt an overwhelming happiness when they got their college acceptance letters, something they had greatly looked forward to.

All of the students displayed great excitement when they finally received acceptance letters from colleges they had been hoping for.

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