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PSAT/NMSQT
PSAT Writing and Language Test

Organizing a Paragraph on Mentorship

Medium Expression Of Ideas Organization

The following paragraph discusses the role of mentorship in personal and professional development. However, it lacks a coherent structure and could be improved with better organization:

Mentorship provides individuals with guidance and support. Many successful professionals attribute their achievements to the mentors who have guided them. In addition to enhancing skills, mentorship often fosters relationships that can last throughout one’s career. A mentor can also challenge their mentees to set higher goals. Researchers have shown that mentorship can significantly impact job satisfaction and career progression for both mentors and mentees.

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