Organizing an Essay on Climate Change

Medium Rhetorical Skills Organization

In her essay on the effects of climate change on marine ecosystems, Maria explores various themes, including biodiversity loss, ocean acidification, and the impacts on human economies. Consider the following paragraph from her essay:

'One of the most significant effects of climate change is the alteration of marine biodiversity. Many species are struggling to adapt to changing temperatures and acidic waters, resulting in shifts in population dynamics. Furthermore, the loss of biodiversity can disrupt entire ecosystems, leading to adverse effects on fisheries and coastal communities.'

What is the best way to organize the subsequent paragraph to enhance the clarity and flow of Maria's essay?

Discuss the economic impacts of declining fish populations before explaining how these impacts relate to biodiversity.

Detail the scientific mechanisms of ocean acidification before connecting them to biodiversity loss.

Introduce a personal anecdote about fishing experiences to illustrate the importance of marine biodiversity.

Provide statistics on marine biodiversity before explaining how these statistics reflect the overall health of marine ecosystems.

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