Revise for Style: Enhancing a Sentence about a Smile

Easy Rhetorical Skills Style

Read the following sentence:

"Her smile lit up the room, bringing warmth and joy to everyone present, as if the sun had come out to play."

Which revision best enhances the style of this sentence?

Her smile was bright, and everyone felt happy.

Her smile illuminated the room, spreading warmth and joy among all present, akin to the sun emerging victoriously.

She smiled, and people felt better.

Her smile made people feel glad.

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