Revising Complex Sentences for Clarity

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In the world of social media, influencers have gained significant power in shaping public opinion and consumer behavior. While some argue that this trend allows for greater authenticity in marketing, others contend that it leads to a superficial engagement with brands. The sentence below needs to be revised for improved clarity and conciseness:

"In a world where influencers have significant power in shaping public opinion, there are those who argue that this trend of influencers leads to greater authenticity in marketing, while there are also those who contend that it leads to a level of superficial engagement with brands that did not previously exist."

Which of the following options best revises the sentence above?

"In a world where influencers shape public opinion, some argue that their trend leads to greater authenticity in marketing, while others contend it creates superficial engagement with brands that was nonexistent before."

"Influencers have gained significant power in shaping public opinion in the world of social media, and while some people argue this trend allows for greater authenticity in marketing, others argue that it leads to a superficial type of engagement with brands."

"In the current social media environment, influencers hold major power in shaping public opinion; however, some maintain that this trend enhances authenticity in marketing, yet critics argue that it fosters a superficial interaction with brands that was not existent previously."

"While in the context of social media, influencers are seen as having the power to shape public opinion and some argue that this contributes to a more authentic marketing experience, others believe it leads to superficial engagement with brands, which is considerably lacking in authenticity compared to previous methods of engagement."

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