Strengthening a Proposal

Medium Rhetorical Skills Organization

Sara is drafting a proposal for a community garden project. In her proposal, she introduces the idea and lists the potential benefits of the garden. The proposal reads as follows:

"Our community would greatly benefit from the establishment of a community garden. Not only would it improve local aesthetics, but it would also provide fresh produce and promote healthy eating habits. Furthermore, the garden could serve as a gathering place, enhancing community cohesion and encouraging educational opportunities about gardening and sustainability."

Which of the following sentences would best follow this excerpt to strengthen her proposal?

In addition to these benefits, we can also reduce our reliance on store-bought vegetables.

Developing a community garden will also require significant financial investment from members.

Studies have shown that community gardens can contribute to a reduction in crime rates.

Part of our project includes a monthly maintenance fee that participants will need to pay.

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