Strengthening a Thesis on Urban Planning

Hard Rhetorical Skills Strategy

Read the following excerpt from a student's essay discussing the impact of urbanization:

"Urbanization brings numerous opportunities for economic growth and cultural exchange. However, it can also exacerbate issues such as pollution and the displacement of communities. To address these challenges, urban planners must prioritize sustainability, ensuring communities benefit from development without compromising their environmental integrity. The need for more inclusive planning is paramount, particularly in areas historically marginalized in city development."

The author plans to make an argument about the importance of inclusive urban planning. Which of the following revisions best strengthens the author's thesis?

Including specific statistics on urbanization rates and their effects on marginalized communities.

Arguing that urbanization is solely beneficial and ignoring its negative effects.

Stating that all urban planners fail to consider environmental challenges.

Suggesting that inclusive planning only matters in developed countries.

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